Tag Archive for editing


Class of 2k12: Facial Expressions

published on February 9, 2012

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I have a post up over on the Class of 2k12 blog. It’s all about how to show what your characters are feeling through facial expressions. It includes some images that have helped…

YA Rebels: Tuesday Loves Up Scrivener

published on November 29, 2011

I thought I would share today’s YA Rebels vlog in which I walk you through how I’m using Scrivener. Feel free to ask me any questions you have! I’m not an expert, but I’ll do my best to answer….

Editing and Pre-Birthday News!

published on June 6, 2011

Oh, hi, world. That’s what you look like again. *blinks*

I know, I know. I’m slacking on the blog, but I have a good excuse. I’ve been editing, and last night I turned in my edits for IF I LIE,…

Speak It! – A Great iPhone App for Writers

published on November 30, 2010

Thanksgiving weekend I drove 6.5 long hours from San Francisco to my sister’s in Southern California. The idea was to pick up some of my belongings that I left…

Battle of the Betas

published on September 16, 2010

We have a new guinea pig…This week Alicia Gregoire volunteered to have eight writers beta read a single page of her urban fantasy “Phoenix Rising” so readers can…

Battle of the Betas

published on August 19, 2010

The lovely and brave Sarah Enni offered herself up as a guinea pig for a little beta experiment. Six writers will take on beta reading a single page of…

Editing, Wordles, and the Color Gray

published on February 2, 2010

I am editing.

Pause.

I. AM. EDITING.

If you haven’t written a novel, you have no idea how tedious this process is. On the plus side, my agent’s changes have been minimal. On the also-plus side, I have taken this opportunity to…

Editing Your Manuscript; Or Amputating Limbs

published on November 15, 2009

iStock_000008245569XSmallToday I did something I haven’t done in a while. I sat down and read my book from first page to last. I clipped my inner-editor’s wings and let myself get lost…

Editing Tip #2: Beginnings (Abusing the Pronoun – Verb Combo)

published on October 21, 2009

While laboring away on my manuscript, I obsessed over the passive verb problem. I switched out the “I was” and “She became,” obliterating most of the sleepy “to be” verbs from my novel. Proud of my work, I…

Editing Tip #1: Passive Verbs

published on October 19, 2009

Every six weeks I submit a packet of writing to my Spalding MFA professor. She then sends the packet back to me with margin notations and summary notes. Many of my mistakes are common to writers, so I thought…