MFA Crash Course: Day Five

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Workshop: Met with the four writers in my workshop, led by Julie Brickman. Today we did a writing assignment in workshop to try out different POVs we’ve been discussing. I plan to post that and my workshop feedback, but I lack the energy to do it tonight since it is midnight and I still have homework. I promise to do it tomorrow. J

Student Readings: 3rd and 4th semester students read from their works or act out their plays. It’s a good opportunity to practice reading your work in front of a crowd. I’m up tomorrow!

Graduating Student Lecture: Killing Them Quickly: How Sudden Death Changes Everything
Jackie Gorman, Graduating Student
This lecture was about the benefit of killing off one of your main characters and what impact it can have based on when you do it in your novel.

  • A character’s response to death reveals a lot about them.
  • If you are going to have a character die, you need to do it responsibly. Gratuitous death does nothing for the reader. However, a death that is meaningful to your story and characters can push your characters into a new space.
  • A quote I loved… “There is something bracing, almost exhilarating, about a catastrophe. Like a typhoon, it sweeps away all the small constraints of daily existence. It opens up the landscape to bold moves and rearrangements that would be unthinkable in normal times. (143) Mary Waters from The Favorites

Graduating Student Lecture: Raising Children and Writing Stories: Not Necessarily in That Order
Julie Stewart, Graduating Student
Like many writers, Julie is balancing parenting and her writing career. She examined how writers have dealt with this in order to benefit her own life. She believes that children can add a lot of magic to your writing. She also shared tips she’s gleened from other writers and her own life on striking a balance between a creative life and mothering.

Plenary Cross-Genre Guest Lecture: An Investigation into Theory and Practice: The Audience’s Participatory Experience in Specific Gravity Ensemble’s Elevator Plays”
Rand Harmon, Founder
Rand Harmon described the intent and theory behind elevator plays. These are 60-75 second plays that occur as you ride the elevator from the bottom floor to the top. The actors change costumed at the top floor and put on a different play on the way down. Four to five people cram in the elevator at a time to watch 1-3 actors. The idea is to break down the barrier between the audience and the actors. Our assignment is to write an elevator play that we will perform at the end of the week. That sound you hear is me shrieking in terror because I. Do. Not. Act. Or. Perform.

Mentor Assignments We each turn in a mentor preference form (due this AM). Based on those, we are assigned mentors at the end of the day with all of us crossing out fingers hoping we get the one we want. After all, we will be working with them one on one thru next January. I’m happy to say, I got Mary Waters – who reads a lot of YA. Tomorrow I get to have lunch with her to get to know her better one-on-one. I also love the other writers in my mentor group. You can’t see me right now, but I look very happy.

Elevator Plays: My group walked over to the Starkes Building and saw four elevator plays. The experience is so unexpected because we are trained to behave a certain way on elevators. In one of them, a business couple started making out while using merger lingo to speak dirty to one another. In another, the elevator would stop at certain floors and various characters from Hamlet would appear framed in the opening as Hamlet himself did his monologue for us. It was uncomfortable and completely entertaining.

*These tips are all my own paraphrases. This blog series is not sponsored by Spalding or its faculty.




11 Responses to "MFA Crash Course: Day Five"

  • saraholutola
    on May 25, 2010Reply to this post

    This is incredible and I love that you’re doing this.

    Great advice. Especially about the character death. It’s so true.

  • kdhart226
    on May 25, 2010Reply to this post

    Ugh, I would be shrieking alongside you if forced to perform against my will.

  • Laura (Common)
    on May 26, 2010Reply to this post

    I would totally freak out if I saw random stuff happen on elevators. I’ve been completely conditioned! This is a really cool series, Cory!!

  • asouillet
    on May 26, 2010Reply to this post

    I pretty much agree with everyone that’s already posted, they got to what I wanted to say first, so I am stuck with saying ditto.
    Thanks for this :)

  • Kaitlin
    on May 26, 2010Reply to this post

    The idea of elevator plays totally baffles me! Sounds cool, though. :)

  • Abby Stevens
    on May 26, 2010Reply to this post

    The benefit of killing off a main character… while I completely agree, the wording made me laugh (I have a strange sense of humor apparently?). I was just imaging some street vendor hocking a box with a skull and crossbones on it. “Get it right here! Death in a box! The benefits of killing off a main character are endless! Step right up!”

    I love this series, btw. Extremely informative and thoughtful.

  • Angie
    on May 26, 2010Reply to this post

    Those elevator plays sound hilarious and I’d love to hear the stuff about killing off a character. I’m planning to do that in my next novel. Great stuff again!

  • Mardou
    on May 26, 2010Reply to this post

    I’ve been following this series and it’s been excellent! Could you maybe pass along some of the tips on children and writing? It’s something that I am currently trying to work with (and summer vacation is coming. Eeek!).

    Thank you (and thanks so much for sharing all this stuff with us)!

  • Rachele Alpine
    on May 26, 2010Reply to this post

    Good luck with getting the mentor you want…my fingers are crossed!

  • susan.quinn
    on May 27, 2010Reply to this post

    OMG you just gave me the ending for my book! Let me explain…I’ve been struggling with writing the ending for my WIP. Fearful is really the right word. I wanted to kill off one of my MC’s but I was afraid of what it would mean for the story. This just jumped out at me:

    A character’s response to death reveals a lot about them.

    This made me realize that the reason I was fearful was that I didn’t really know what it meant for the MC left behind. But of course their response will drive the ending.

    So.

    Now I know what to do.

    THANK YOU! Your course is incredibly valuable to me, and I’m not even attending! I can only imagine what you’re getting out of it!

  • Cory Jackson
    on May 27, 2010Reply to this post

    Your comments are so lovely and mean a LOT. I’m relieved and happy and glad the tips are working for you. :)

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