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May 11, 2010
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Teaser Tuesday

More of my wip, Interior of a Heart. This is a literary YA I’m working on about a girl turned into an outcast in her town when she keeps a secret for her boyfriend, a soldier who has gone MIA in Afghanistan. Quinn’s father has just driven away from her house after her father has ordered her to stay home.

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11 Responses to "Teaser Tuesday"

  • Karla Nellenbach
    on May 11, 2010Reply to this post

    as always, beautifully written :) love this line: Pain creases his face into a tic-tac-toe grid of wrinkles.

    and I really like George! :)

  • Kaitlin
    on May 11, 2010Reply to this post

    Very, very beautiful. Love it!

  • Liz Page
    on May 11, 2010Reply to this post

    So good! This flows like poetry. I’m just in love with this story :)

  • Lynkay
    on May 11, 2010Reply to this post

    *glares at internet* As I said, I love the descriptions and the interaction between the characters. I like George :D

  • Remilda Graystone
    on May 11, 2010Reply to this post

    I like George. I’m wondering what your main character is doing or why she even does this. As usual, this piece is beautifully written. I especially enjoyed reading the descriptions of George’s wrinkles.

  • Ellen
    on May 11, 2010Reply to this post

    “George insists he is faster than a three-legged dog in a two-legged race, whatever the hell that means.” LOL. Great line. George seems cool!

    (apologies if this posts twice, the first one died on me, booo)

  • LM Preston
    on May 12, 2010Reply to this post

    Darn, why do these teases have to end. Just when I get into it – gone and I have to wait until next Tuesday and cross my fingers in hopes for more.

  • Becca
    on May 12, 2010Reply to this post

    Love your descriptions! So gorgeous! :D

  • Bri
    on May 12, 2010Reply to this post

    I love the dialogue, and your writing is just beautiful. Loved it!

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    on May 14, 2010Reply to this post

    Its Very, very beautiful. Love it!

  • the sister
    on June 6, 2010Reply to this post

    I am always awed by your beautiful hand…

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