More of my wip, Interior of a Heart. This is a literary YA I’m working on about a girl turned into an outcast in her town when she keeps a secret for her boyfriend, a soldier who has gone MIA in Afghanistan. Quinn’s father has just driven away from her house after her father has ordered her to stay home.
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11 Responses to "Teaser Tuesday"
on May 11, 2010 | to this post
as always, beautifully written
love this line: Pain creases his face into a tic-tac-toe grid of wrinkles.
and I really like George!
on May 11, 2010 | to this post
Very, very beautiful. Love it!
on May 11, 2010 | to this post
So good! This flows like poetry. I’m just in love with this story
on May 11, 2010 | to this post
*glares at internet* As I said, I love the descriptions and the interaction between the characters. I like George
on May 11, 2010 | to this post
I like George. I’m wondering what your main character is doing or why she even does this. As usual, this piece is beautifully written. I especially enjoyed reading the descriptions of George’s wrinkles.
on May 11, 2010 | to this post
“George insists he is faster than a three-legged dog in a two-legged race, whatever the hell that means.” LOL. Great line. George seems cool!
(apologies if this posts twice, the first one died on me, booo)
on May 12, 2010 | to this post
Darn, why do these teases have to end. Just when I get into it – gone and I have to wait until next Tuesday and cross my fingers in hopes for more.
on May 12, 2010 | to this post
Love your descriptions! So gorgeous!
on May 12, 2010 | to this post
I love the dialogue, and your writing is just beautiful. Loved it!
on May 14, 2010 | to this post
Its Very, very beautiful. Love it!
on June 6, 2010 | to this post
I am always awed by your beautiful hand…