More of my wip, Interior of a Heart. This is a literary YA I’m working on about a girl turned into an outcast in her town when she keeps a secret for her boyfriend, a soldier who has gone MIA in Afghanistan. Quinn’s father has just told her that Carey is MIA.
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17 Responses to "Teaser Tuesday"
on April 27, 2010 | to this post
This is amazing. I feel horrible for her, and I want to know more!!
on April 27, 2010 | to this post
How awful.
You’ve done a great job describing the emotions in this scene. <33
on April 27, 2010 | to this post
Aw! This story is just so heartbreaking and addicting. I just want to read more and more and more. Great tease!
on April 27, 2010 | to this post
on April 27, 2010 | to this post
oh my gosh, this is so beautiful! I love it and I have to know more!!!
on April 27, 2010 | to this post
Wow, such an addicting teaser. I want to keep going!! This really made me sympathize with her, and want to know what is going on so badly.
Awesome job!
on April 27, 2010 | to this post
very intriguing! Love the last couple of lines!
on April 27, 2010 | to this post
Awww this story has got a really good premise! I want more! Awesome tease!
on April 27, 2010 | to this post
Whoosh! Wow.
on April 27, 2010 | to this post
Beautiful writing. I’m so curious about what happened before this and what happens next.
on April 28, 2010 | to this post
OMG… so sad
I feel awful for her…
Gorgeous writing. Love your style!
on April 28, 2010 | to this post
Yay! Well, not yay, because this is so sad, but I’ve been waiting to read more on this. It’s so intense. Completely moving and amazing.
on April 28, 2010 | to this post
Wow, this is so good! Great imagery, and I’m really sucked into your MC’s story. I feel so bad for her at the end!
on April 28, 2010 | to this post
Whoa. This was mind-blowing and added another layer to the story. I have to know what’s going on here.
on April 28, 2010 | to this post
Wow! A lovely teaser. I want to know what happened and what’s going on. Great emotions portrayed here.
on April 29, 2010 | to this post
The details are so lovely. It’s very well-written
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on April 30, 2010 | to this post
This is really intriguing. Wow, so that’s why everyone’s weird around her. She cheated on Carey. Well … can’t say that I blame them for their reaction