Teaser Tuesday

More of my wip, Interior of a Heart. This is a literary YA I’m working on about a girl turned into an outcast in her town when she keeps a secret for her boyfriend, a soldier who has gone MIA in Afghanistan. Quinn’s father has just told her that Carey is MIA.

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17 Responses to "Teaser Tuesday"

  • Kaitlin
    on April 27, 2010Reply to this post

    This is amazing. I feel horrible for her, and I want to know more!!

  • Becca
    on April 27, 2010Reply to this post

    How awful. :( You’ve done a great job describing the emotions in this scene. <33

  • Karla Nellenbach
    on April 27, 2010Reply to this post

    Aw! This story is just so heartbreaking and addicting. I just want to read more and more and more. Great tease!

  • Annie
    on April 27, 2010Reply to this post

    :( This snip made me feel little sad, which means it’s AWESOME!! Great Snip!

  • Laurie
    on April 27, 2010Reply to this post

    oh my gosh, this is so beautiful! I love it and I have to know more!!!

  • Ellen
    on April 27, 2010Reply to this post

    Wow, such an addicting teaser. I want to keep going!! This really made me sympathize with her, and want to know what is going on so badly.
    Awesome job!

  • bethany
    on April 27, 2010Reply to this post

    very intriguing! Love the last couple of lines!

  • Karla
    on April 27, 2010Reply to this post

    Awww this story has got a really good premise! I want more! Awesome tease!

  • sputnitsa
    on April 27, 2010Reply to this post

    Whoosh! Wow. :)

  • Stephanie
    on April 27, 2010Reply to this post

    Beautiful writing. I’m so curious about what happened before this and what happens next. :)

  • Ka.thy Br.adey
    on April 28, 2010Reply to this post

    OMG… so sad :( I feel awful for her…
    Gorgeous writing. Love your style!

  • Liz Page
    on April 28, 2010Reply to this post

    Yay! Well, not yay, because this is so sad, but I’ve been waiting to read more on this. It’s so intense. Completely moving and amazing.

  • Debra Driza
    on April 28, 2010Reply to this post

    Wow, this is so good! Great imagery, and I’m really sucked into your MC’s story. I feel so bad for her at the end!

  • Remilda Graystone
    on April 28, 2010Reply to this post

    Whoa. This was mind-blowing and added another layer to the story. I have to know what’s going on here.

  • angie
    on April 28, 2010Reply to this post

    Wow! A lovely teaser. I want to know what happened and what’s going on. Great emotions portrayed here.

  • Bee
    on April 29, 2010Reply to this post

    The details are so lovely. It’s very well-written :) )

  • Akin
    on April 30, 2010Reply to this post

    This is really intriguing. Wow, so that’s why everyone’s weird around her. She cheated on Carey. Well … can’t say that I blame them for their reaction

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