Teaser Tuesday
What’s this, peeps? A Teaser Tuesday? I know it’s frickin’ unbelievable since I haven’t played along in ages. Funny how switching tense can get a constipated piece moving along again. This is a literary YA I’m working on about a girl turned into an outcast in her town when she keeps a secret for her boyfriend, a soldier who has gone MIA in Afghanistan. Let me know what you think.
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14 Responses to "Teaser Tuesday"
on April 6, 2010 | to this post
Wow. I’m speechless! This was wonderful! The writing was absolutely brilliant! I could write down every part I loved, but I’m not sure it would fit in this little box.
Your premise sounds very interesting, by the way!
on April 6, 2010 | to this post
I love this. It’s fantastic in this tense! The last paragraph gets me, it’s so sad but so so great.
on April 6, 2010 | to this post
This is gorgeous! Sounds like it will be a tear-jerker.
on April 6, 2010 | to this post
Wow, wow, WOW! That is all. <33
on April 6, 2010 | to this post
This is really good. Very, very good. I like your take on literary YA and would be interested to read more.
Also, as an aside, there’s a smiley face on your blog page. A small smiley face, right there, on the top right corner. Did you put that on purpose?
on April 6, 2010 | to this post
I did notice, but I can’t claim responsibility. It came with the template. I only customized the header.
on April 6, 2010 | to this post
I love this sort of stories. Absolutely amazing! More please.
on April 6, 2010 | to this post
this is amazing! so glad you’re teasing again. can’t wait to read more!
on April 6, 2010 | to this post
Beautifully written!
(I tried to post already and my internet spazzed…sorry if I post twice–or three times.)
on April 6, 2010 | to this post
Very Nice! Lovely description, and nice characterization!
on April 6, 2010 | to this post
This is so good…it’s inspiring! Amazing details!
on April 6, 2010 | to this post
Oh, love this! Lovely writing, and the last para was so sad! This is going to be sad, isn’t it? CURSE YOU!
Oh, and as an aside–have you read Flash Burnout? MC in that is into photography, too!
on April 6, 2010 | to this post
This is coming to my inbox eventually, yes? Yes. Glad we agree.
on April 8, 2010 | to this post
Wow. I am really interested in reading more. I like it a lot. Plus the premise sounds really interesting and you could do so much with it! Good job!