Teaser Tuesday More of a WIP, Interior of a Heart… *Snip Removed* By Corrine Jackson|January 12, 2010|Uncategorized|19 Comments Share This Story, Choose Your Platform! FacebookTwitterLinkedinRedditTumblrGoogle+PinterestVkEmail About the Author: Corrine Jackson Related Posts Permalink Cover Reveal: IGNITED (Sense Thieves #3) Permalink PUSHED Book Birthday! Permalink June SCBWI Workshop: Social Media for Writers Permalink It’s My Birthday Permalink Gallery IF I LIE is on the 2013 IRA Young Adults’ Choices Reading List 19 Comments Kate January 12, 2010 at 11:42 am - Reply Hooyah indeed. I less than three you. Becca January 12, 2010 at 11:46 am - Reply Dude, I <3 your descriptions and your prose. Srsly. 🙂 Krista Ashe January 12, 2010 at 12:53 pm - Reply Oh man, I loved this! But I’m not surprised since I loved Touched so much. I totally love Carey, and how she’s not able to fight him off, and he wants her so much. I love her reaction to him. Awesome! Sighs, I feel a another literary crush coming on! Kaitlin January 12, 2010 at 1:18 pm - Reply LOVE this. Vero January 12, 2010 at 1:45 pm - Reply wow. This is absolutely gorgeous! houndrat January 12, 2010 at 2:15 pm - Reply Amazing prose here, Cory, seriously. Really love the snips of this story I’m reading! 🙂 bclement412 January 12, 2010 at 2:48 pm - Reply Love your writing! LizPage January 12, 2010 at 2:50 pm - Reply Love this!!! From the start I was pulled right in. Lia Victoria January 12, 2010 at 3:55 pm - Reply With the sheer amount of Teaser Tuesdays I feel obligated to read and comment on, usually when they’re this long I’ll harbor this secret resentment. I want more of this one. I was drawn in and felt like I was actually reading something I would spend money on and keep on my shelf and recommend to others. I agree with the person above me — I might have an insy crush on Carey :] Kathy January 12, 2010 at 4:15 pm - Reply LOL @ facebook status. Geez, this is good. All of it. I really like Carey already… not just because he has muscles 🙂 raven January 12, 2010 at 4:37 pm - Reply Wow. Stellar first line and this is such beautiful prose. And I agree with Krista. Carey = another great literary crush. Great snip 🙂 CupofDice January 12, 2010 at 5:48 pm - Reply Love the voice. Love the MC’s honesty. Paranormalchick January 12, 2010 at 6:37 pm - Reply Okay I’m team Carey too because I <3 Hawt boys!!!LOL Creating a lit crush is no easy feet! Props!! Love the writing, it flows so smoothly! Great Snip Amanda January 12, 2010 at 6:44 pm - Reply I’m so in love with the way you write! Laurie January 12, 2010 at 6:59 pm - Reply This is beautiful. Awesome prose. Hannah January 12, 2010 at 8:03 pm - Reply So good, Cory! 😀 Karla Nellenbach January 13, 2010 at 7:12 am - Reply Love this little snip! This is so beautifully written and I see Carey perfectly….Also, I love the little bit about the braces being likened to a dental chastity belt! lol Angie January 13, 2010 at 8:02 am - Reply You had me snagged at dental chastity belt it and it just kept going. I especially love how she hits him and he just laughs like he’s expecting it. You’ve done a great job with this. Lovely, lovely tease! LM Preston January 13, 2010 at 3:13 pm - Reply I absolutely loved, loved, loved your opening sentence. It was like, “You had me at Hello.” Great job. Leave A Comment Cancel reply Comment nine + = thirteen Sign me up for the newsletter!