Teaser Tuesday
A new work to tease from! Hallelujah! This is the opening of Chapter One of a new work – uncut and unedited. Working title: INTERIOR OF THE HEART. I’d love to know what you think!
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17 Responses to "Teaser Tuesday"
on December 1, 2009 | to this post
I love this – the characterization of Quinn’s mother is wonderful!
on December 1, 2009 | to this post
I love this. I want to know what she’s logging onto facebook to see!! And I love the name Quinn. The way you build her world is great, I can already feel the kind of household she grew up in, the way it changed, and the one she lives in now.
on December 1, 2009 | to this post
I like it! It tells a lot about the character, just from talking about her parents.
on December 1, 2009 | to this post
This was great, Corrine! You’ve done an excellent job describing her background in an almost Desperate Housewive narrative fashion, which is a compliment. I loved the world building right from the get go!
on December 1, 2009 | to this post
Wow, this is so well written. I want to read more of this. I love the backstory with the family and Quinn’s name. Seriously, I adore this.
on December 1, 2009 | to this post
You are a tease– nice cliffhanger there!
We should start having Slutty Saturday. Think about it…
on December 1, 2009 | to this post
That last line was a heck of a hook!!!
on December 1, 2009 | to this post
Ohh, can I join slutty Saturday, lol?
Love this, Corrine! As someone else mentioned, fabulous characterization, and written so tightly! I already have a great sense of her upbringing and history, and you presented it in a thoroughly compelling way.
Also, dying to know what’s on the facebook–MEEP!
on December 1, 2009 | to this post
You are such a tease! I want to know more!
on December 1, 2009 | to this post
This is amazing. There is so much description and so much going on “under the hood,” so to speak. I felt like I was reading an actual book, not a WIP.
on December 1, 2009 | to this post
Cliffie was great and the description you gave for Quinn’s mother was brilliant. Backstory with the perfect amount of description.
on December 1, 2009 | to this post
I love this!
You describe Quinn’s mother perfectly. And the first sentence was very hooking and this snip overall was well-written. I look forward to reading more. ^_^
on December 1, 2009 | to this post
Love your descriptions! I want to know what she sees on FB!
on December 1, 2009 | to this post
WOW!!! Your flow is excellent! Had me hooked all the way through
on December 1, 2009 | to this post
This is such an intriguing beginning, an excellent voice and introduction. I’d definitely read more if I had picked this up in the store. ^_^
on December 2, 2009 | to this post
SUCH A TEASE!
I loved the characterisation of the mum, she felt real to me.
on December 2, 2009 | to this post
This is so brilliant! Loved the characterization too and I cannot wait to read more!!