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October 27, 2009
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Teaser Tuesday

This is an excerpt from Chapter Four. In this scene, Asher has just saved a boy from falling into a bonfire, burning his hand in the process. Remy chases him, unsure if he’s the enemy but unwilling to ignore a person who needs her help. I won’t give you anymore background than that because it will give away the story. Enjoy the scene, regardless!

*Removed so as not to spoil things for my readers*





8 Responses to "Teaser Tuesday"

  • Becca
    on October 27, 2009Reply to this post

    I LOVE your descriptions!! I want to know what both of them are! :D

  • Vero
    on October 27, 2009Reply to this post

    Wonderful description and great action! I love the details on the healing process and his internal working!!

  • Kaitlin
    on October 27, 2009Reply to this post

    This is so cool. I flew through it!! Great job:)

  • Emilia
    on October 27, 2009Reply to this post

    “Helping you whether you like it or not” – great dialogue!

    This was fantastic!! The healing was so well-written and chilling.

    p.s. love your names.

  • oldpeoplewritingforteens
    on October 27, 2009Reply to this post

    Ah, I really like this. I love how she’s so determined to help fix him, and then how it really pains her. I’m wondering what kinda dynmic these two have going on.

    Good job! Can’t wait to read more!!!

  • oldpeoplewritingforteens
    on October 27, 2009Reply to this post

    Crap…..somehow I’m logged in as OPWFT….This is Krista! or Juneluv12 on the boards!

  • houndrat
    on October 27, 2009Reply to this post

    Great stuff–super intriguing! I like how thoroughly you describe the healing process, and the chemistry between them.

  • Karla
    on November 2, 2009Reply to this post

    Oh wow, such beautiful descriptions and language! I am super hooked!

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