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October 20, 2009
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Teaser Tuesday

Here is an excerpt from Chapter Three of TOUCHED. This scene takes place on a deserted patio at the Underground, a club open to teens one night of the week. This is the second time Remy and Asher have met.

*Removed so as not to spoil things for my readers*




7 Responses to "Teaser Tuesday"

  • CupofDice
    on October 20, 2009Reply to this post

    Whoa, good! Would love to read more! So mysterious!

  • Krista Ashe
    on October 20, 2009Reply to this post

    OOH, this is awesome! I love the sexual tension and then the whole, “You get burned for touching, ahole!” LOL

    I’m really interested in the fact she’d knew to town and the dynamic of she and her sister’s relationship!

    COOL!

  • choco
    on October 20, 2009Reply to this post

    This was really good! Love the tension between the MC and the main character. And what happened at the beach? Hmm?

    I’d love to read more :D

  • Vero
    on October 20, 2009Reply to this post

    I need more! I really loved the tension and the powers. Very good.

  • S and S
    on October 20, 2009Reply to this post

    (Yum, Asher :3)

    Anywho….the MC was great, felt that I could relate to her. I wan to know more about this sister…Great tease!

  • Ash
    on October 20, 2009Reply to this post

    Very good! I’d read more!

  • Common
    on October 22, 2009Reply to this post

    This was great! You really get into Remy’s head, and the tension is electric! I’d love to read more of this!

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